作者：王安新
My favorite cartoon character is Doraemon. Hes a cartoon star. He comes from Japan.
He looks cool and interesting. His head and back are blue. His face and stomach are white. He often laughs from ear to ear. He has two short legs and two big feet. Doraemon is very fat, because he likes eating red bean cakes.
He is not only lovely but also friendly. He often helps people. There is a big bag on his stomach and there are many wonderful machines in it. When you are in danger, he will take some machines to help you. So all of the people love him.
I love him very much.
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本文條理清晰，層次分明，語言簡潔流暢。習(xí)作者通過對機(jī)器貓的外表和個性的描述，使一個活靈活現(xiàn)的卡通形象躍然紙上。全文語言親切、自然，體現(xiàn)了小作者對該卡通人物的喜愛之情，是一篇較好的習(xí)作。